Friday, 2 March 2012
Thursday, 1 March 2012
A2 Feedback
Jack Thornton
Really good, like the opening shot with the book, very good shot posture. think some of the shots could of been darker. but good use of sound like the tearing sound.GOOD WORK GUYS!
Sophie
-Really Powerful
-Liked the effects at the beginning
-the soundtrack accompanied it well
-On the shots of vodka bottle, a distorted effect would look good.
Lauren Arnold
The title opening is well constructed with the book. When the adult male actor wipes his head over the book maybe the title could appear as he brushes over the book. On the section where there is no sound maybe you could have some slight sound/ blurred or something. The color scale is really good.
Katie
The beginning effect were really good and appropriate, more effects like this would look good, over the scenes where there weren't so many effects.
Really good, like the opening shot with the book, very good shot posture. think some of the shots could of been darker. but good use of sound like the tearing sound.GOOD WORK GUYS!
Sophie
-Really Powerful
-Liked the effects at the beginning
-the soundtrack accompanied it well
-On the shots of vodka bottle, a distorted effect would look good.
Lauren Arnold
The title opening is well constructed with the book. When the adult male actor wipes his head over the book maybe the title could appear as he brushes over the book. On the section where there is no sound maybe you could have some slight sound/ blurred or something. The color scale is really good.
Katie
The beginning effect were really good and appropriate, more effects like this would look good, over the scenes where there weren't so many effects.
A1 Feedback
Maisy Osbon
Very Good shots and liked the juxtaposition shots between the alcohol and the flashback. very emotive, tense and "thriller like". Great story-line, very believable. Doesn't look like a student movie, very professional overall, really liked it.
Jenny
Really good story and god use of shots. very tense atmosphere created and feels real! Very Good.
Charliiee
Very nice car, Believable props, good shots, well put together and well edited. had me sitting on the edge of my seat. Had very good effects in the sequence, put distorted effect on the vodka bottle and maybe on the Grants bottle. Would add more effects.
Adam
Car needs a bleep when opening, good sounds effects and intercuts.
Very Good shots and liked the juxtaposition shots between the alcohol and the flashback. very emotive, tense and "thriller like". Great story-line, very believable. Doesn't look like a student movie, very professional overall, really liked it.
Jenny
Really good story and god use of shots. very tense atmosphere created and feels real! Very Good.
Charliiee
Very nice car, Believable props, good shots, well put together and well edited. had me sitting on the edge of my seat. Had very good effects in the sequence, put distorted effect on the vodka bottle and maybe on the Grants bottle. Would add more effects.
Adam
Car needs a bleep when opening, good sounds effects and intercuts.
Test Shots For Opening Credits
These are Shots of the pages in the Opening credits in order they are in the film.
We added the pictures on the pages to add to the theme and to thicken the plot.
we decided to do our opening credits in a prop format, we got our inspiration from the film "Seven" which is also based around a scrapbook. We decided that we would have our opening credits in a prop format opposed to digital text on the screen as we thought it was more relevant to the thriller genre.
We added the pictures on the pages to add to the theme and to thicken the plot.
we decided to do our opening credits in a prop format, we got our inspiration from the film "Seven" which is also based around a scrapbook. We decided that we would have our opening credits in a prop format opposed to digital text on the screen as we thought it was more relevant to the thriller genre.
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