Thursday 1 March 2012

A2 Feedback

Jack Thornton
Really good, like the opening shot with the book, very good shot posture. think some of the shots could of been darker. but good use of sound like the tearing sound.GOOD WORK GUYS!

Sophie
-Really Powerful
-Liked the effects at the beginning
-the soundtrack accompanied it well
-On the shots of vodka bottle, a distorted effect would look good.

Lauren Arnold
The title opening is well constructed with the book. When the adult male actor wipes his head over the book maybe the title could appear as he brushes over the book. On the section where there is no sound maybe you could have some slight sound/ blurred or something. The color scale is really good.

Katie
The beginning effect were really good and appropriate, more effects like this would look good, over the scenes where there weren't so many effects.

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